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I love that it includes all races, ages and socioeconomic backgrounds. It’s such a colorful array of people.

All your characters are beautiful. And though they each get five to seven lines, the words you chose give us a glimpse into their world. Beautifully written.

The ending left this cliffhanger of sorts because it doesn’t follow the exact pattern as the rest of the poem.

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